Last year I took a creative writing class at college. Though the story is fictional, it is based on several occassions which may be all too familiar to many of you.
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I like Monday mornings. This Monday was one of the
best. A warm Fall morning made for a comfortable walk to my local coffee shop.
Beside me my guide dog plods along. We keep a nice easy pace. My fingers
feeling the handle on his harness tells me when he is moving up or down on the
sidewalk just in front of me. My dog knows this route well so there is little
need of me to give directions. I can listen for clues as to where we are. A
fading echo here lets me know that buildings are dropping back from the side
walk, the scent of eucalyptus there tells me the main street crossing is coming
up soon. The fading sound of traffic tells me that the lights are changing and
it is almost time to cross the street.
As the warm sulpherous aroma of coffee begins to
fill the air I know we are near the coffee shop.
"Find the door. Find." I tell my dog as
his pace picks up. He knows this part of the walk is nearly done and he will soon
lie beneath a table, or warm himself in a beam of morning sunlight.
Going inside I order and pay for my coffee. I slip
my dog a treat as we wait for my drink to be made. Taking up my cup as it is
passed over the bar, I tell my dog to find the door again so we can sit at a
table outside on the sidewalk.
We find our way to a vacant table and chair. Setting
down my coffee on the table I arrange my dogs leash so he can lay comfortably
and sit myself down to enjoy the beautiful morning.
"Hello. That's a nice dog." A woman's
voice says.
I turn to the sound of the voice.
"Thank you. He is."
"Are you training him, or are you visually
impaired?"
"I'm blind."
"I'm sorry. It must be difficult for you."
"You get used to things."
"Your dog is just watching you all the
time."
I smile and reach down to stroke his head. "I
like to think that he loves me but it's more about the treats that I carry in
my pocket."
I hear her laugh a little nervously. "Yes love
is a very important thing."
I hear the sound of a chair scrape on the floor, then
the woman's voice is close beside me.
"Speaking of love, do you know the word of
Christ?"
I reach out for my coffee cup. Beginning to feel
anxious. I take a sip of coffee.
"Knowing Christ in your life will allow you to
see again."
I wonder if she can see me rolling my eyes behind my
dark sunglasses.
"I'm sure."
"Christ cured the blind. It's here in his
gospel."
I nod slowly. Where the hell do I find them? I think
to myself. They must crawl out of the woodwork when they see me coming.
"Would you take this wonderful dog from me?
She stutters a moment.
"No, no. But you could see how beautiful the
world is. See your beautiful dog."
I shake my head slowly.
"He is a guide dog. A dog trained to guide a
blind person. If I could see. I would not be blind. So he would not be here
with me."
"God would make a way for you to be
together."
"He did. He made me blind."
I know this hits a mark and I feel her interest in
the conversation wane. Perhaps she is thinking I am a lost soul or maybe not
worth her efforts to save me.
She coughs awkwardly. As I pick up my coffee again, I
hear her footsteps walk away from my table followed by the scrape of a chair on
the concrete sidewalk.
I reach down again and stroke the soft ear of my
guide dog. Now feeling awkward, I continue to sit. The conversation is still
irritating me but I cannot leave my seat feeling that to do so would give her a
victory.
I begin to feel the warm sun on my hand as it rests
on the woven wire table. Above my head the parasol snaps in a slight breeze.
Cars continue to deposit customers at the coffee shop. Someone walks by with
what smells like a toasted bagel. I feel my dog lift his head to take in the
delicious aroma. My coffee is still warm and bitter and as I drink the last
drop my thoughts drift away from the conversation.
I think that
she must have left by now so taking up my dog's leash we begin to leave. Tony,
one of the baristas, is cleaning the outside tables and says,
"Thank you Mike" and wishes me a good day.
I wave goodbye,
"See you next week Tony. I do love my Mondays
here".
Thank you for reading the story. I hope that you enjoyed it.
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